I did pretty well with my first theme and only a little off of my goal for the second theme. I was not surprised with these grades at all actually. I was very pleased with my first theme because I really wanted to write a great college essay. I got an 85 on my resume and cover letter theme. I wish I had made some less mistakes but otherwise I am pleased. I did well following the FCAs but my style and wording needs to improve. I could make my sentences flow better.
I should use more imagery and deep thought in my essays. Although i follow most of the FCAs well there is flaw in my writing that must be improved.
Overall I need to be able to put the reader in my shoes and shower them deeper thought. For my college essays I need to really how the college who I am. For the second theme I did well on my resume but I struggled in my cover letter. This lets me know what I need to work on.
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